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Hajinur Uyghur
09-11-07, 14:47
By: Hajinur Uyghur

Freedom, Independence, life, we had all,
Mothers, fathers, and brothers, we had family,
Uighurs, people of Eastern Turkistan, we had identity.
Yes November 12th was the day of Independence.

We walked paths dripping with fresh blood,
We cleaned our land, our home with blood,
Blood dripped, life left the body, yet it was appealing,
We had what meant the most to us, we had Independence.

All our pasts, our great times, and depressions,
Our falls, our rises, our ways, our good deeds,
Our history were to be found in text, in words,
Words, words would preserve to our future.

We celebrated, we sang, danced, and more,
We spoke with our sweet native tongue,
We held our newborns in our own arms,
And we opened doors to our faith and prayed.

That was the Novembers of our past,
The times we were free, times we celebrated,
No, we no longer hold that independence,
But we do hold the will to hold it once more.

And this day and on we are ready,
like before to give all we have,
blood, lives, children, mind,
every thing we own for freedom.

oguzh
10-11-07, 07:01
[QUOTE=Hajinur Uyghur;28677]By: Hajinur Uyghur

Freedom, Independence, ......

Uighurs,

All our pasts, , in words,

Words, words would preserve to our future.

HAJINUR,
YOU ARE FAMOUS !! (at least here..)

YET YOU SPELL A VERY IMPORTANT WORD WRONGLY AND INSISTENTLY !!

A POET SHOULD BE A MASTER OF VOCABULARY AS ESSENTIAL TOOLS...

The Uyghur people have decided on the correct spelling of their name,
and announced it on the internet both in homeland and abroad:

THE CORRECT WAY IS ''UYGHUR'' AND NOT ''Uighur'',

whether we like it or not,it is the common consent,
I personally like the Turkish version ' UYGUR',
but avoid confusion I use the new version.


Grammatically speaking you cannot use 'PAST' in the plural form !!!!

(PASTS...) is poor knowledge (if you want to show off...how much you speak,know English)

For a woman you use to much violent words,blood and manly bravery...

Yours is not the kind of material (it sure is not poetry what you have!)

that thousands would memorize by heart and recite at every patriotic occasion !!!

Probably you wish it were .....

but it takes a while to get there..


To be more honest, you could get away with this if you are a 5th or 6th grader

but UAA message board is adult communication,

you should grow up elsewhere with your poetry attempts,

and post your mature and ripened results here

and save us time.

each time you send stuff like this,I feel sorry for you,

cause it takes courage to post childish stuff like this on an international message board.


Well,close your ears to flatteries and compliments,

they do not reflect the truth.

In a few years you will also not like what you have done,

and out of shame you may want to erase some of your stuff...

but once the arrow has left the bow...


You may not like me for this,

but at least I have the courage to be a target of your hate

for writing my critique...

(if you do not want to be criticised,then you know what to do,

keep it to yourself,

in the depths of your private poetical diary...-if you have one..)


BORING.....


oguzhan

agalandurghuchi
10-11-07, 22:15
[QUOTE=Hajinur Uyghur;28677]By: Hajinur Uyghur

Freedom, Independence, ......

Uighurs,

All our pasts, , in words,

Words, words would preserve to our future.

HAJINUR,
YOU ARE FAMOUS !! (at least here..)

YET YOU SPELL A VERY IMPORTANT WORD WRONGLY AND INSISTENTLY !!

A POET SHOULD BE A MASTER OF VOCABULARY AS ESSENTIAL TOOLS...

The Uyghur people have decided on the correct spelling of their name,
and announced it on the internet both in homeland and abroad:

THE CORRECT WAY IS ''UYGHUR'' AND NOT ''Uighur'',

whether we like it or not,it is the common consent,
I personally like the Turkish version ' UYGUR',
but avoid confusion I use the new version.


Grammatically speaking you cannot use 'PAST' in the plural form !!!!

(PASTS...) is poor knowledge (if you want to show off...how much you speak,know English)

For a woman you use to much violent words,blood and manly bravery...

Yours is not the kind of material (it sure is not poetry what you have!)

that thousands would memorize by heart and recite at every patriotic occasion !!!

Probably you wish it were .....

but it takes a while to get there..


To be more honest, you could get away with this if you are a 5th or 6th grader

but UAA message board is adult communication,

you should grow up elsewhere with your poetry attempts,

and post your mature and ripened results here

and save us time.

each time you send stuff like this,I feel sorry for you,

cause it takes courage to post childish stuff like this on an international message board.


Well,close your ears to flatteries and compliments,

they do not reflect the truth.

In a few years you will also not like what you have done,

and out of shame you may want to erase some of your stuff...

but once the arrow has left the bow...


You may not like me for this,

but at least I have the courage to be a target of your hate

for writing my critique...

(if you do not want to be criticised,then you know what to do,

keep it to yourself,

in the depths of your private poetical diary...-if you have one..)


BORING.....


oguzhan

Qusurhan Aependim sizning Uyghur aemeslikingiz yazmilirngzdin chiqip turuptu
aeger siz bashqilardin yahshiraq yazdighan bolsingiz aeserlirngizni kopchilikke sunung
aeger sizge bu wezipini hittay akilirngiz yukligen bolsa bilip qeling sherqi Turkistan anilliri sherqi turkistan helqining azatliqi yulida kuresh qilidighan yuz minglap qiz -yigitlerni tughdi wae tughudu. gule-gule!

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16-11-07, 21:20
By: Hajinur Uyghur

Freedom, Independence, life, we had all,
Mothers, fathers, and brothers, we had family,
Uighurs, people of Eastern Turkistan, we had identity.
Yes November 12th was the day of Independence.

We walked paths dripping with fresh blood,
We cleaned our land, our home with blood,
Blood dripped, life left the body, yet it was appealing,
We had what meant the most to us, we had Independence.

All our pasts, our great times, and depressions,
Our falls, our rises, our ways, our good deeds,
Our history were to be found in text, in words,
Words, words would preserve to our future.

We celebrated, we sang, danced, and more,
We spoke with our sweet native tongue,
We held our newborns in our own arms,
And we opened doors to our faith and prayed.

That was the Novembers of our past,
The times we were free, times we celebrated,
No, we no longer hold that independence,
But we do hold the will to hold it once more.

And this day and on we are ready,
like before to give all we have,
blood, lives, children, mind,
every thing we own for freedom.


hormetlik hajinur hanim her qetim yazghan sheringizning ya tekistini , ya
menasini bilelmey bek qiynilip ketiwatimen.
sizning enggilische tilingizgha apirin! til insan uchun nahayiti chong bayliq. her-bir til ,bir dowlet yaki bir millet dimektur.

teklip bolsa yazghan shierliringizni aldi bilen uyghurche elan qilip, bashqa enggilische sehipige enggilische yaki bashqa yene bildighan tilliringizda elan qilghan bolsingiz .

we yaki uyghurchini untup qaldingizmu? eger uyghurchini untup qalghan bolsingiz hechqusi yoq. birer terjuman ishletsingizmu boliweridu.